Afternight

Hey everyone. I've been writing a character who is suffering from memory loss and i've been thinking about giving him visions from the memories he's forgotten but i really don't ...

Greeting :-D I was wondering if i could bother you for a really small review on a really short short story i wrote. no rush though whenever you get to ...

Hey Pretzel. I was wondering you could review my work. it's a really short short story :-D thanks

Greetings Dragon :-) I was hoping i could bother you for a review it's a short story and a really short one at that so it won't take much of ...

I've been writing this thriller story the first part of which I've already put up on the site but I have a problem with the chapter length. No matter what ...

@Holysocks I understand what you're saying but I really don't think I can leave this story before seeing it through... According to my friends I have an obsession with closure ...

@LadySpark Thanks... This helped a ton :-)

@Holysocks I've been working on this for a couple of months but I've had this problem with almost every thing I've written. For some reason it sounds right in my ...

@Ladyspark One of the spirits had caught up them and tackled Kairaz to the ground, but before it could make a move an arrow flew straight into spirits heart, if ...

@steampowered My problem is not really with the story, I'm actually quite satisfied with the plot that I have in my mind. My problem is as you said with the ...

Hello everyone. I'm writing a fantasy novel and I need some help. Whenever I write one paragraph I go back and read what I've just written, and everytime I feel ...

Hello everyone. I'm Afternight. I'm new here and I thought I should introduce myself. I've chosen to stick with my username not really because of safety concern but because i ...