Aenvgiel

Thank you, and you are right this is one of the first poems I wrote back in 1997. So I guess it is a beginner poem, I do have a ...

I thought this poem was very sweet, the subject matter always seems to be a hard one for me to write about, so it is much appreciated when someone else ...

It seems there is no escaping, from the tenacity of my being. That caught me from child's grasp, to wake from dreaming with a gasp. I know who I am; ...

".....shake the hard, high men in their hard, high towers; ..........rock the gates of heaven on their human foundations. Give me a human arrow to shoot an angel, .....a human ...

Thank you very much, I appreciate your kindness.

Thank you, I will try to shorten some of the lines.

Thanks for reading and the kind words.

I enjoyed reading this piece. Good job.

Listening to your words, your eyes tearing me down. My love being the only thing, to help me drown. Slowly suffocating; rearranging, the ugliness that's always been there. You made ...

I see my life in raindrops; tiny water-bubbled memories, as they fall. And I wait for the deafening thunder; the reckoning of realization hits, that I am myself, so very ...

When I read the poem, and I must admit I truly enjoy your writing style, I envisioned an "undead" feeling about the two. Maybe welcoming her to your side, is ...

I actually thought it was quite beautiful. An image of falling from grace, in many ways. I enjoyed it.

I'd like to say hello :::waves hand sheepishly::: I do not have very many friends where I live that enjoy poetry so I rarely get to share or even read ...