Aedomir

I really like your style. I find that the drab, 10 page endings of stories bore me like hell, but that got to the point, no faffy waste of words. ...

That was a very good piece. It certainly showed your skills in dialogue, and inserting a good bit of humour in there. I thought it was catchy, interesting and makes ...

This is a very moving piece, strange really. I just find present tense very catchy (although I would never use it!). You have brilliant talent and I can't find enough ...

Personally, I am not a huge fan of present first person, but I can see the pluses (that right?). Anyway, I think your style is quite appleaing, but I am ...