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AdmiralTyler

AdmiralTyler

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Addiction

    Thanks for the review! I tried fixing the first two stanzas but it still isn't working for me. I also fixed the capitalization at the beginning. Thanks for pointing that ...

    Oct 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Addiction

    Just a another note, each stanza is four lines so right after the line "How I'm killing you" is a new stanza because something happened and it's not spacing between ...

    Oct 28, 2013


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