Adeera

woah woah woah!!!!!! PLEASE tell me there is a second part!!!! chapter coming SOOOON GGAHHH i'm dying here!!!! but no seriously that was incredible!!! i have no complaint except that ...

ooh very nice, i'm usually not one for mysteries but i must admit you have me caught in a trap that i'm afraid will not release me till the next ...

i really liked the feeling of sorrow i got from it, and i only have a few things to say against it. nearer the beginning and middle it felt like ...

oohh thats really awesome and intense i love how you started it. i'm not very good at grammar so i'm not gonna bother you with that but i did notice ...