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Re: deleted
:shock: Well, i have to say this was the sadness and sweetest story that I've read so far. I like how you portrayed Zack's cancer and emotion to Amanda. One ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: You're such a liar
Great story! You really described her emotions with just the right amount of description and didn't over do it. Just a few things i picked up: 1) But... he wouldn't ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: This Sweetness Brought - 1.1
WOW!!! Very nice job in describing your character and a bit of what he's like. The poem at the beginning is a bit of a stretch. I think you should ...
Apr 14, 2010