Adderstreaks

As expected by you, it's very good! However, I found a few sentences were a bit awkwardly phrased at the beginning, but that could just be me. I don't believe ...

This was a really interesting read! From my own experience, I believe you used that style of older English in a skillful way that not only portrayed that your piece ...

As some may have previously mentioned, this piece greatly reminded me of a Vocaloid song I've hear before. Nevertheless, I love how you [possibly] turned the song into a great ...

This is really interesting, Myst. The way you organized your ideas gets me curious as to what is happening, just like the character you used is puzzled as well. I ...

... Don't listen to "The Ghost of You" when reading this piece... Anyways, to the reviewing! It's very intriguing and I'm curious to learn who this 'him' is. Not who ...

I really enjoyed reading your Fanfiction! I'm a lover of the Warrior Cats series, and I love how your writing reminds me of the series. I now have the urge ...