Adderstreaks

As expected by you, it's very good! However, I found a few sentences were a bit awkwardly phrased at the beginning, but that could just be me. I don't believe ...

This was a really interesting read! From my own experience, I believe you used that style of older English in a skillful way that not only portrayed that your piece ...

As some may have previously mentioned, this piece greatly reminded me of a Vocaloid song I've hear before. Nevertheless, I love how you [possibly] turned the song into a great ...

This is really interesting, Myst. The way you organized your ideas gets me curious as to what is happening, just like the character you used is puzzled as well. I ...

(Note: I'm not an expert at writing poems so the formatting is probably wrong. Feel free to tell me how exactly you're supposed to do it. Also, I wrote this ...

... Don't listen to "The Ghost of You" when reading this piece... Anyways, to the reviewing! It's very intriguing and I'm curious to learn who this 'him' is. Not who ...

I really enjoyed reading your Fanfiction! I'm a lover of the Warrior Cats series, and I love how your writing reminds me of the series. I now have the urge ...

Chapter 1 Sitting on a grassy hill that crouched low before a small deciduous forest was a lone figure who cast his gaze up at the darkening sky. Although it ...

Awesome story, naturally. You're such a good writer, really. Must read the others 8D