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Ok, I've read all of it the Prologue, the first chapter etc, etc. And I'm sorry to say, but I'm going to be harsh. The Prologue was great, just what ...

Whoa, you really switched views on this one, slightly confusing. But that's ok because, we all have so many thoughts running around our heads, that when we're writing about one ...

Hey, I liked this very much! But I don't get where everyone is getting the name Jacob, is it in the other two chapters? Because I haven't seen it here ...

This was mighty nice, loved how you kept to the same dialogue the pirates used. A woman for a captain! I love that idea! I always thought there should be ...

Wow, that was really long, and as everyone else has told you that not many people want to read something that long, I've done it before and didn't get that ...

Aw, wow, so sad! I really felt what Kate was feeling, good name by the way. She's on the verge of getting on her knees and begging for him to ...

Aw, poor thing, I know how she feels. It sucks sitting around while everyone else and their mother hook up. But anyways I liked it, alot. You say your not ...

Hey! Ok, I still really like the name Levi, that's a total plus. I like the story so far, the whole Keepers, thing is very different, in a good way. ...

This was good, everything was pretty much said. I like the suspense, I'm one for a book that makes me think "Dun dun Duuun!" you know those notes or keys, ...

Lovely. Is it going to be a horror story? If so it sounds like a good scary one. OK, I want to know what happens to the house, does anyone ...

Whoa...man, just whoa. In a good way, though. I did think that this was going to be another vampire story, and the thought continued with, 'Seriously, more vampires?' But as ...

Oh this was so refreshing! Who would have though that boxing could be this entertaining to read? I watched it, and was nearly bored to tears, but this my friend ...

This was cool, can't wait to see what happens next, totally wonders why April couldn't hear his thoughts when he had caught her, makes me think.."Ooo! What kinda characters will ...

This was good, interesting, but good. To be honest, I didn't get why this was called "Tarzan Boy" did you just pick the name out of a hat or what? ...

This was very cute, I enjoyed it. Most everything has been said, you get in trouble for not describing your characters enough and I get in trouble for over describing ...