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Hey! I have to agree with everyone so far, your story has a lot of potential it just seems that you have so much running around in your head and ...

Carlito!! Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!! OH!!! Man!! I just love girls like that, she just totally ripped him a new one! Oh my dear you did her perfectly, and she didn't ...

Carlito darling, Very nice job, you got the angst just right! I don't mind the language at all, if it were me no matter what anyone else says, I wouldn't ...

Hey Carlito, First off thank you for letting me know that the next couple of chapters for Mic Night was up. Again this is very good, very sweet and wholesome. ...

Hey Carlito! This was sooooo good!! I'm glad I finally found enough time to get my butt on here and start reviewing some things, and I'm especially glad I just ...

Hey Lux! I really enjoyed this except of Charlie and Logan, it had its fill of excitement and mystery. There were just a couple things that I really didn't get, ...

Hey Wicked, I'll be honest here, and I hope it's not brutal honesty, I don't mean to be, promise. This first chapter, is it a chapter? Kinda short. Well, like ...

Hey Lauren, Quick review here, sorry getting kinda late where I am, and you know how good sleep is. I really liked how this has so far panned out, the ...

To start off, my name is Addawen, sup. I'm not the type of reader who will overly nitpick on your grammar and stuff, one: because I stink at it, two: ...

Hey Pink, Two times in one night, I must be feeling generous, kidding. You know, I comment more on your writings than anyone else's, their just so good, can't help ...

Hey Pink! As ever you have delivered with Taboo, I am thoroughly pleased with it, congrats. I really don't have an nitpicks, or grammar issues, but you hardly ever have ...

Hey FictionFanatic, This was really really good, I totally enjoyed reading it! I can't wait to read more. I only found a few problems, One: when a new person talks ...

Hey Pota, This was pretty good, one of the nicest Twilight fanfictions I've read in awhile, I would give you a longer critque, but I can barely keep my eyes ...

Hey Nike, This is great so mysterious, I can't wait to read more. I am super curious about the list of course, but the strange people in this girl's house, ...

Hey Wicked, This is a good start, I really enjoyed reading it. This is the first uhh...pole dancer...I've read on here and granted there are probably more, but I haven't ...