AdamHomer

Your honesty is comforting You are not only self aware, but you are devolping a world awareness. One of my favorites I've read on the site. :)

I'm almost petrified by how good that was for someone of any age (let alone 13) You have your own original mythology that is captivating Strong Prose, Hurano. :)

Thank you both for your feedback, i really needed it. Suzanne, in terms of being rather gross and a tad sophomoric I pride myself in being unapologetically honest. and "distasteful", ...

Haha thank you guys for reading. This is an except for a novel I'm writing. The novel is a memoir of sorts about a boy and his adventures his first ...

Clever dialogue, it really draws you in. Wish it was longer.

The last line is haunting and believe it or not it sticks with you. I wish i could say the same for the rest

I admire your honesty, it is refreshing to see a piece not polluted by stressed metaphores. But it is almost too simplistic, I think if you widen your vocabulary you ...

Swollen and disgraced you still kissed me, then retreated behind your job. You were easy on the eyes and my skin. It’s a shame you are so busy, it’s probably ...

Drilling for plastic….. I looked at the sky today. I mean extensively looked at the sky, not the inadvertent look we all do. I mean eyes fixed, head cocked back, ...