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this caught my attention and kept it. It was well written with the exception of a few talking heads. As good as it was it didn't feel quite right.... prehaps ...

This was Lovely. It was obviously well reserched and very cute! I giggled on numorous occasions and was delighted with every new word. The idea of Wolfgang Playing guitar was ...

That was a little odd. Your flow was nice and it was a a good concept, but it was odd. I felt totally lost and had no idea what was ...

This was nice, but you should of probably made this a novel insted of multiple short stories. If you don't know how to do this go to "submit" and click ...

I really liked it! Your story showed two sides to love. The sweet simple love that 's more like a freindship, but evolves into something stronger and deeper than any ...

Hi. Personally I'm a little biassed. I love wolves! I have done a little research on wolves that may help your story. If you have already done your own research ...

this peom Is so deep I was worried I'd get lost in it. how personal it is, is what makes it so lovely, It paints a sad, dark, yet beautiful ...

this is a wonderful story. Personally I never liked Cinderella, but this is a well thought out, funny, and quite harsh parody. your new veiw on a classic story is ...

Hi! love your first chapter. you grab the readers' attention by starting the book in the middle which makes the reader have a slight sense of confusion, but also sparks ...