Achitaka

It has to be Hardback only because paper backs don't have enough punch to knock out a noisy person in one hit.

Gotcha, I that case I have quite a few good ideas in how to change this story up a bit. I get writting it here pretty soon. Thanks this helps ...

When you tell the reader something instead of showing it, you do a few things that can be detrimental to your story. First, you rob the reader of the creative ...

The bells rang throughout the halls of Hiyama Academy, this marked the ended of a week long vacation for the students. The students filed into their classes one by one ...

Okay is the warrior in this story immortal or something? He got his abdoman torn open, and fought a dragon for an entire month? I`m just wondering this because it ...

Okay I have been reading your Fanfic since it began but I have just been to lazy to post anything so... here I go. Okay the biggest problem I see ...

It is so the can opener. Ah, can opener where would I be with out you.

Dear lord everyone should have a towel, its the most important tool when you`re hitchhiking the Galaxy

It`s a well written piece of art is all I can really say... *Goes and crys in the corner for a little bit*

Here's a tough question. What's the only thing that can beat Febreze? More Febreze duh. Of course what type of Febreze beat which type is still a mystery.

This is a well written piece of work you have here. The flashbacks are really interesting, it`s like the character is going down memory lane barefoot but memory lane is ...

Yah I have been mentioned in this thread. but seriously don't bother asking me anything, I'm only 4-kyu in the Japanese language right now.