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Re: Naruto vs Sasuke: The Final Bout (Spoilers)
Hey Ace, Nate and Jabber have already covered the problems with grammar and sentence structure, so I'm not going to rehash it all to you :P Just remember, spellcheck is ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Left 4 Dead - The Beginning
WOW! I loved the game, and I love this story equally! Great job, and I can see others have corrected your mistakes already! Nice story.
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Fluffy the Vampire Slayer: A Parody (Part 1)
Nice story. I noticed that it was a little short, but that it explained what was needed and didn't leave any gaps. Good job.
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Silence: Chapter One
Sweet! Was kinda feeling alone on this website! If you like writing stories like this you should check out It's a site where I post all of my stories. Names ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: How To Begin Your Summer
I lost my memory card, so I can't post the second part of the story now...I was so far into it, I had like 15,000 words and it was really ...
Apr 17, 2009