Abigail_W.

Thanks for the advice, Young gun, and I'll post what I come up with in a new thread in a little bit.

In the last line, I meant for it to be, " Sorrow thrives a million times . . ." Please excuse the typo. :oops:

I like the laid-back attitude with which you write, although there were some spelling and grammar mistakes. If you rechecked your comma use and made sure you used one consistent ...