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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Your Dream

    I really like this poem, i think it has an beautiful sound to it. Your description is second to none 'I looked into your eyes and I realized The are ...

    Oct 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Nymph.

    Wow where do i start with this poem, this is a great piece i haven't seen a such a powerful poem in such a long time Your stanzas are beautifully ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Low

    Well done, this is a poem which i think nearly everyone can relate to because one time or another we have all felt like this "why love and care but ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Sinking

    This poem i believe has great potential but it also has a few faults which i think makes it quite difficult to follow. Before i go on with the faults ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: How I Became King

    Well Done, I Think this is a very light but very imaginative poem as i believe the concept is loose but very easy to follow "But they wouldn't listen to ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Conquered

    This Poem is remarkable, i hope this is not a personal outburst but in a poets view it has a rich quality the stanzas are beautifully structured which highlight the ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Can See

    In my eyes i believe that this is a poem which has two distinctive responses, without sounding cheesy this poem can be compared to Marmite and what i mean by ...

    Jul 1, 2011


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