Abby_Dramaqueen028

I awaken to hear coughing, sneezing, and a little girl calling out "mom!" She doesn't attend school for three days. Everyday I come home to see the girl sleeping on ...

This was good. It was confusing to me at points, but still very good. I like how you put it about love in the summer time. It has a nice ...

I wonder what goes through his mind about her I hear people say different things I want her to be happy again I am wondering I pretend time has stopped ...

This was really good. I can see where your coming from...I'm a model. It was kind of flat though. I would really want to see more drama put into it. ...

Oh wow...this is great! I loved it, from the end to beginning and beginning to end. I have been through this type of thing too. And I was in so ...

You said you liked me, Then ask to be together I said yes within a blink of an eye, Even though I shouldn't have You said you loved me, It ...

Well that made me think twice before I walk off from my boyfriend. It was good. I liked it. Really and truely we should all be 13 or over so ...

Ok that was good and gross at the same time. :? I thought some of it had a little humor to it. You did have some grammer mistakes, such as ...

Ok..I'm kinda new at this but yeah I liked it alot. You had some grammer mistakes...I do too so don't worry. Though over all it was really good and understandable.

That was great. I am new to the whole website so I am not sure what its suppose to be like. Oh well in my head that was so beautiful. ...

It was very good. I wished it had more creative description. I hoped in the future it will be more suspenceful. I loved the ending parts though. They acted like ...

That was good. I really enjoyed it, but i thought it should have been a tad bit more like exciting. LOL Oh well you write the best that I know. ...

Girl: How could you do this to me............I thought you two loved me? Dad: I do, we do its just not working out between us. Girl: But still what's not ...

This is my first entry: You like me and never want to leave me You lover her and can't ever leave her Why can't you see you're ripping both of ...