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Aasthik

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Adventures of India

    @Snoink & AzaleaLexis: Thanks for going through the poem and expressing your views :) Will help me improve!

    Jan 20, 2012
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Adventures of India

    Hi! Anyway, capitalization hints that there is something big going on and that the word is very important. Which may be the case! But, there were an awful lot of ...

    Jan 20, 2012
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Adventures of India

    Hey Aasthik! I'm terrible at reviewing poetry, but I just wanted to say that was a fun poem to read. And hey, fellow Indian, welcome to YWS! Hi AzaleaLexis, It ...

    Jan 20, 2012
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Adventures of India

    The country of Economic Problems, The country of Social Tensions, Price-rise, poverty and Unemployment, All the pains, of a Developing Nation! Every year there are Elections, O! World’s largest demo

    Jan 12, 2012


It's funny how humans can wrap their mind around things and fit them into their version of reality.
— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief