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Re: Love Lost
The idea was great. I loved it. It is the ultimate tragedy.
May 29, 2011 -
Re: To None I Can Remember
This was simply W.O.W ! I loved the way you wrote it. this topic has been dealt with a number of times but I really liked your approach. The first ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Lilies
It is absolutely wonderful story. For the starters, I loved the names you used. They add to the story a lyrical tone. I loved the line- "Her smell of lavender ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: the lone witness
Thank you guys. As far as capitals and spaces are concerned, I'm sorry for being a bit lazy. And I'll start straightaway not being so anymore. ' Unto' stands for ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: my latest work
a beautiful piece. the imagery and the usage of adjectives is apt. every thing seems well matched, neither overtly pensive nor plain descriptive. some very thoughtful lines present themselves througho
May 28, 2011 -
Re: the lone witness
All through winter, And all through fall, They came for her But she ran past all. Torn and scared, she ran into the woods, Where behind the red alder, you ...
May 28, 2011
