Aari

I think mago means grandchild. :D

Hi, thank you so much for all of the feedback. I really appreciate it. I should've mentioned that this is actually a non-fiction piece. I guess that would change how ...

Hi, Zaibae. This is Aari, and I read your poem and just wanted to let you know what a great job you did. Although, I have one feedback for you: ...

I will definitely work on it. Thank you so much!

Hi Elinor, Thank you for the review. I tried to bring in the topic of eating disorder, and the character%u2019s anxiety and how he sucks at relationships to kind of ...

Hi Dreamy, Thank you so much for taking the tome to read and review my story. I totally agree with what you said about the ending. I could%u2019ve done a ...

This is a great poem. I can definitely feel the hurt the writer is feeling. But lines like, "you've stolen my soul from me, committed murder with..." I think you ...