AardvarkSlave

Nyarg, not my best. At all. And, from the description... No, this does not contain any spoilers for the movie. In fact, if I hadn't said I was inspired by ...

I thought this was a touching piece and I definitely felt sympathy. The stanzas, though... Sometimes, I feel they are misplaced. I know, multiple stanzas can form one sentence, but ...

This was made on the computer? ... Wow. Of course, I feel as if I shouldn't critique this, because I go by a policy that you can only critique a ...

Warm, salty tears streaked the dirt-caked face, pooling under her small chin and dripping down onto the dew-covered grass and dotting her luscious eyelashes. Her thin lips separated to let ...

Yet, I still wanted to be your only girl. This comes from the fourth paragraph, and the last line. Now, the next paragraph has basically summed up Stella's feelings on ...