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Re: Hell Fire Chapter one
I liked it. You did a great of painting the picture and putting me right in the story. However it seemed like you started the chapter stronger than you ended ...
Nov 29, 2010
I liked it. You did a great of painting the picture and putting me right in the story. However it seemed like you started the chapter stronger than you ended ...
Nov 29, 2010
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