AWhiteDolphin

I liked it. You did a great of painting the picture and putting me right in the story. However it seemed like you started the chapter stronger than you ended ...

i know its a bit of a read but i would really appreciate some feedback =)

“We should be down there. How are we ever to get into this fight if they always keep us on reserve?” A young elven knight stood on the eves of ...

Hi all! I'm really excited to be here! Writing short stories has been a hobby of mine for quite a while but has never become anything more than that, a ...