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  • General Fiction Novels Re: When the Blood Smears

    this was confusing, but good. What does the teacher mean when she says this is not the mc first time in her class? Other than that i like it! continue! ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Duel

    i really enjoyed reading this, but i think you could have included a little more detail in the intensity of the battle, or some of the moves that the people ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Am I

    i like this poem, but like some others have said, it didn't flow well, and you shouldn't have put true twice. I love the idea behind it though! the rhyme ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Nightmare

    Faceless people stare at me, my fear showing plain as can be. I think, I hope, I may be dreaming, Faceless people, standing screaming. Frightening words, coming out, my voice ...

    Aug 2, 2010


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson