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Re: When the Blood Smears
this was confusing, but good. What does the teacher mean when she says this is not the mc first time in her class? Other than that i like it! continue! ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Duel
i really enjoyed reading this, but i think you could have included a little more detail in the intensity of the battle, or some of the moves that the people ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Am I
i like this poem, but like some others have said, it didn't flow well, and you shouldn't have put true twice. I love the idea behind it though! the rhyme ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Nightmare
Faceless people stare at me, my fear showing plain as can be. I think, I hope, I may be dreaming, Faceless people, standing screaming. Frightening words, coming out, my voice ...
Aug 2, 2010
