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Hi, this is a very well written poem! I like to use rhyme in my poems too, so I really liked how you used it in yours, especially in the ...

Hi, I really like this poem! I love your rhyming pattern, especially in the third stanza: "Tell me, how can I still be When my mind has already been shattered? ...

Hi, I really like this poem! I love your rhyming pattern, especially in the third stanza: "Tell me, how can I still be When my mind has already been shattered? ...