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  • Short Story » Horror, General
    Re: I'm Cold

    Hi Oakley! Pol here with a review :> I'm a huge fan of horror, it's definitely one of my favorite genres to read and write in so I'm really excited ...

    Sep 11, 2024

  • Short Story » Realistic, Science Fiction
    Re: The Star Children

    Hiya! Pol here to review this piece. I love this! A journal surviving thousands and thousands of years, different generations writing in it to showcase how life on earth changes ...

    Sep 8, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 4

    Hiya Chem, Pol here once again with a brand new, shiny review just for you! Let's dig in, shall we? First off, I want to say I'm impressed with how ...

    Sep 6, 2024

  • Script » Humor, Romantic
    Re: Je t'aime. (I love you) - 1

    Hi Kaavya!! Pol here to review your story! I would like to start this off by saying I believe this is a script and should probably be put in the ...

    Sep 5, 2024

  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy
    Re: Blue Vapor

    Hellooo Queue! I'm Pol and I'll be reviewing this piece here using the Review Monster! His bark is worse than his bite, but mind his tail as he doesn't always ...

    Sep 5, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 3

    Hi again, Chem! :> Today, I'll be reviewing this chapter with the Review Monster! He's just a silly, goofy guy who likes chomping on stories. The Glowing Eyes: First Impressions! ...

    Sep 3, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 2

    Hiya Chem! Here to review the second chapter of this story, no fun and silly template this time unfortunately. Going to get this out of the Green Room for you ...

    Sep 2, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor
    Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 1

    Hello, Chem! :> Today, I'll be reviewing this piece with the Review Monster! He may seem scary but don't worry, he's all bark and no bite. The Glowing Eyes: First ...

    Sep 2, 2024

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Culture
    Re: THE FIRST supreme god, odin.

    Hello Rover, I've noticed your work sitting in the Green Room for quite awhile, let's get it out of there today, shall we? I'm a huge fan of Mythology and ...

    Mar 2, 2024

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Wishful

    Hello watercolours, nice to see someone who puts a ‘u’ in the word colours haha! I don’t typically review poetry simply because of how abstract it is, which makes it ...

    Mar 1, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Overview

    Hiya Wren, belated welcome to YWS! This story seems very interesting, I’m hoping to see if you post any more of it. Poisonous mist is such an intriguing apocalyptic setting, ...

    Mar 1, 2024

  • Short Story » Narrative, General
    Re: Nothing is wrong

    Hello, Polt here with a new review and a welcome to YWS! Without further ado, let's begin, shall we? The first thing I notice is that it's short and simple. ...

    Feb 25, 2024


  • (No template for me today, just going through with my thoughts.) Hello Keep (can I call you Keep?), I'm Pol and I'll be reviewing your work today! :D Honestly, I've ...

    Feb 22, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Chapter I - Draft I

    Hello, Omerhand! Today, I’ll be stealin- borrowing the Review Monster! But don't worry, he's all bark and no bite! The Glowing Eyes: First Impressions! Alright, let's start this review off ...

    Feb 8, 2024

  • Other » General, General
    Re: test

    Hello, Pol here to review this amazing looking work! ;) I saw it in the Green Room and I couldn't help but be in absolute awe of the title. Test! ...

    Feb 7, 2024


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