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Re: Something is Coming!
All in a few seconds, his life was in a new turmoil. All those from his vision had gathered, but seemed to be fighting in confusion. Thankfully he had other ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Something is Coming!
OOC: Hm. What the heck? Might as well. BIC: Skyler Sae ran into the apartment, quickly finding the door with the correct number. 777. The number for Powers. 7 was ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Something is Coming!
*My turn* Name:Skyler Sae. Age: 18 Gender: Male Power: Psychic, past and future, and can use tele-powers (i.e. Telekinises, teleport, telepathy...) When he has his visions, a barrier comes up, ...
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: Romance/fantasy Averian Marie Story
Hi Averian! Here with a review. To start off, Let's look at the plot. I think that there is a definite possibility of a plot. I know you told me ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 7.
I love it! It's very good. And Angels-Symphony was right. Perhaps Alonsa can show Amelia her dad or something. Or something related to Alonsa comes into this world, such as ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 6. Part 2.
Great story! I still like it! I can't think of an error, most likely because I was sucked into te plot!
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 6. Part 1.
I looked quickly at my iPod and saw I’d reached the end of the album I’d been listening to. I think this sentence is a bit to long, although I ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Magius Trilogy - The Black Emerald
Hey, I really like this! I just finished reading your first one of these! It seems like a great plot!
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 5.
On that one sentance, try, "The flowers Mum had brought were being clutched next to her chest." I liked it as much as the rest.
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 4. Part 2.
Oh. My. Gosh. You are really talented! I think you're awesome! This is an amazing story, and I don't need to review it! If you need a really, really, really ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Deceptions Twin
Hi, I'll review you today! :D First of all, thoughts. Where the hell am I? This should be italizied. I'll not mention that anymore. Cool water lapsed against her feet ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: The Philosopher
Ahh, new writer! Welcome to YWS! I liked this piece quite a bit. I hope you don't take criticism as an insult (And if you do, I can sympathize, I ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 4. Part 1.
Oh I love your writing! I should have you edit my stuff, not the other way around! You're brilliant!
May 28, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 3.
Oh, please PM me whenever you write something!
May 28, 2009 -
Re: I Need You To Write. - 2.
Oh wow wow wow wow wow wow wow! How can I say that enough! This is wonderful! Are you going to get it published? I think you should! I love ...
May 28, 2009