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((OOC: Please continue! This is a wonderful roleplay!))

I blinked once in reply, a habit formed from my earliest instructor in the military. "What way?" I asked the woman who was obviously in authority. She indicated a direction ...

I don't want it to die either, but I've backed myself into a corner, sorry about that.

Allan: Feeling slightly tired from the use of my power, I stood up and began to follow everyone. I noticed Blue, the emotion reader, seeming rather blank. He didn't seem ...

Allan OOC: Sorry for the short post but I don't have too much time. Feel free to have him pack up everything in one of you guys's posts. At Emmi's ...

Allan I stretched my arms as I woke up. I stood up and rubbed my eyes. After throwing on some warmer clothes, I stepped outside to start the day. Most ...

Name: Allan Roshae Age: 22 Appearence: He's six feet four inches tall exactly, and has brown hair with natural highlights. It's loose, and he has a single, thin braid going ...

The voice of the tour director droned on, as I glanced at the exhibits. While I usually found most museums interesting, this guide was terrible! His voice was ruining the ...

Please forgive me if I repeat what was already said in another review, I only skimmed the previous one. I really liked the plot of the story. Also, your setting ...

Okay, that's one person. If it seems confusing and half-baked, that's because I wanted to get the idea across without giving away to much. And I'm terrible at doing that.

What's the general opinon of a story with this basis: There's a seperate "dimension/world/reality" connected to ours that is purely imagination. It is affected by acts of the imaginations. In ...

Thanks, guys. I'm glad you reviewed. Any ideas on how I might flesh out the story, like ElementalBlood said? I've drawn a total revision blank.

"Jerime! Jerime!" came a female voice from the next room. Jerime got up off his chair, setting down his clay. He pushed in the chair, and turned to the door ...

This isn't a review yet, but I just want to say I really like this!

Okay, let me say, I really quite like this. I think it's an excellent opening. Now, I'm not the best of reviewers, so try and get a lot of others ...