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AHuman

If you call me Toby I swear by my pretty floral bonnet I will end you.

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Descent: Chapter One

    Sometimes you change between first and third person and it isn't quite clear. Just a thing. Make sure it's obvious it's Jack's thoughts. Use italics. I like italics. Italics are ...

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Majesty of the Sea (Petrarchan Sonnet form)

    As this is the first thing I have read on this website, I don't have much to compare it against, but I'd have to say this is the best thing ...

    Feb 6, 2014


As the notifications drift in I stop and wonder. Why do they take so long? Do they have adventures we don't know about? I bet they do. When they come I will ask myself. What amazing adventure has this straggling notification been on? How far did it travel, and why didn't it take me?
— TypoWithoutCoffee