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AHuman

If you call me Toby I swear by my pretty floral bonnet I will end you.

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Descent: Chapter One

    Sometimes you change between first and third person and it isn't quite clear. Just a thing. Make sure it's obvious it's Jack's thoughts. Use italics. I like italics. Italics are ...

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Majesty of the Sea (Petrarchan Sonnet form)

    As this is the first thing I have read on this website, I don't have much to compare it against, but I'd have to say this is the best thing ...

    Feb 6, 2014


They who talk all day of beauty call all the plain things dirty
— John Darnielle