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AHuman

If you call me Toby I swear by my pretty floral bonnet I will end you.

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Descent: Chapter One

    Sometimes you change between first and third person and it isn't quite clear. Just a thing. Make sure it's obvious it's Jack's thoughts. Use italics. I like italics. Italics are ...

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Majesty of the Sea (Petrarchan Sonnet form)

    As this is the first thing I have read on this website, I don't have much to compare it against, but I'd have to say this is the best thing ...

    Feb 6, 2014


For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle