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Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Descent: Chapter One
Sometimes you change between first and third person and it isn't quite clear. Just a thing. Make sure it's obvious it's Jack's thoughts. Use italics. I like italics. Italics are ...
Feb 6, 2014
Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Majesty of the Sea (Petrarchan Sonnet form)
As this is the first thing I have read on this website, I don't have much to compare it against, but I'd have to say this is the best thing ...
Feb 6, 2014