AD9midnight

OK, the concept itself is great. A detective story from the perspective of an obviously twisted criminal. However, due to the fact that the emphasis was mainly on the criminal, ...

A good clear style of writing, and the exposition in the beginning details the setting with as few words as possible. Your economical writing style lets you get more bang ...

Although the setup (teenage girl, famous attractive superstar, random meeting, romance in the cards) is cliché, it's been presented in such a unique way that it's not a problem while ...