ABoyAndHisFlyingYeti

I'm not really sure what to say about this but that's not because it's dumbfounded or confused me in any way, but because i'm currently running on levels of sleep ...

I'm not going to sugar-coat it, bro, this story confused my balls off. I didn't really comprehend the world, the characters, the conflict. How old was Lisa? When is this ...

I can dig it. loi. This is the kind of poetry i enjoy reading. The rhythm and flow and rhyme-scheme were incredible and beautiful.. until the last couple of lines. ...

Holy balls, that's depressing. lol I love the way you set up the world. I really got a feeling that this was in like, the calm right before the storm ...

Welcome to yws. :) i hope you enjoy it here. I think you'll find this place to be not only fun, but also caring and supportive. :D if you need ...

Thanks anyway. ^-^

This should probably be in lyric, I know, but I don't feel like taking it down again and re-posting it.. again.

Sydney By: Zachary Miles She is a beautiful sunrise at the start of a great day, A great night at the fair with good friends, An oasis of care in ...

I enjoyed this piece because it really explores one of the greatest paradoxes of human existence. this being said, i feel it could use some sort of a plot and ...

hey! :D It's nice to meet you. I'm sure theres plenty of people on here that would be interested in you AND your writing. I hope you enjoy it here. ...

Not, gonna lie, bro, i didn't get it.Maybe i'm too stupid to get it. idk. However, it was quite choppy in parts and the plot seemed a little... lacking. I ...

Hey, Ire (may I call you that?) I think you'll enjoy this site a lot. (: I can't wait to read your writing, as I am sure that it will ...

Welcome aboard! :D i hope you get inspired and write some amazing stuff because I'm exited to read it. (: the people on here are generally pretty supportive.. but wont ...

oh. lol.. i didnt even think about Brian Jacques.. oops

thanks bro. lol