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so they are tourists hmmm.....I think if I would have written it I would simply have mentioned it but all of us have different views The last stanza's are emotionally ...

Excellent word painting. I loved the line Young spirits shy from the marrows of wood, pressing their footprints into battle dust Amazing :!: As I read this I am there!!!! ...

Hello; Nice poem :!: I read it through gathering the little thougths and then re-read it gleaning some of the deeper meaning. Hope you success in your future writing ~ayman~ ...

what I get is that somebody come on a bus with a crew taking a camera... It does'nt makes sence! :?:

This was a wonderful poem! :smt026 Great rhyme. Wonderful meaning. There are some tences in past and some in present, but it actually adds to the poem I think. :roll: ...

Thanks for this so warm welcome I mostly write poetry but I am also writing a novel on my own life. Its hard to say which story or author I ...

Loss is difficult, no one said it would be easy. fading of mind and body, can have severe consequences. I think if you remove CAN from the last verse will ...

Hi! I m new Not in the world of course.And I would like to make some friends.Some good ones. I have not much to tell about myself. Just that I ...