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This is a very dramatic piece with, no doubt, underlying meaning. Shorter poems tend to be dynamic in this way, but nevertheless yours is still very original. The flow from ...

I really enjoy this. It doesn't follow much of an orthodox form of poetry, yet I can find a beat in it (like an 80's synth song, as mentioned). Very ...

This reminds me of one of those "12 word stories". Short, blunt, and to the point; all done tastefully. In less than 20 words you have successfully brought up a ...

How very E. E. Cummings of you! I got such a kick out this. There is one way to simply ignore the annoyingly nit-picky laws of grammar, and another to ...

I've been needing my post-apocalyptic sci-fi fix! Although the premise is slightly overused, it's a likable concept and I hope to see where you take this. The opening paragraphs had ...

This is a wonderfully executed piece about something, although beautiful, is deemed socially ugly. I love how it opens with such innocence and progresses with age accompanied by learning the ...