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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Board

    This is a very dramatic piece with, no doubt, underlying meaning. Shorter poems tend to be dynamic in this way, but nevertheless yours is still very original. The flow from ...

    May 21, 2015

  • Poetry » Health, General
    Re: loosely

    I really enjoy this. It doesn't follow much of an orthodox form of poetry, yet I can find a beat in it (like an 80's synth song, as mentioned). Very ...

    May 21, 2015

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: The Window

    This reminds me of one of those "12 word stories". Short, blunt, and to the point; all done tastefully. In less than 20 words you have successfully brought up a ...

    Apr 15, 2015

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: unconventionaL

    How very E. E. Cummings of you! I got such a kick out this. There is one way to simply ignore the annoyingly nit-picky laws of grammar, and another to ...

    Apr 15, 2015

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Narrative
    Re: Walking Survival - Prologue

    I've been needing my post-apocalyptic sci-fi fix! Although the premise is slightly overused, it's a likable concept and I hope to see where you take this. The opening paragraphs had ...

    Apr 15, 2015

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    This is a wonderfully executed piece about something, although beautiful, is deemed socially ugly. I love how it opens with such innocence and progresses with age accompanied by learning the ...

    Apr 15, 2015


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