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Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Into the Giant's Land
Hi,nice story.Though i found a few wrong,namely the first two lines.A few sentences could do a little better with some rephrasing.Still,good job and keep it up!
Feb 2, 2009
Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What is ou purpose?
Really nice poem.Though i found the last line a little odd,everything flows well togethor.Great job!
Feb 2, 2009

Knowing too much of your future is never a good thing.
— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief