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I wrote this essay about somethin im truly passionate tell you the truth when i cant really describe what its like to be inside a circle or even practicing.The word ...

First off,great story.I really like it as it is really good,but,could be so much better.One thing i noticed some of your sentences come off a little long.What i mean is, ...

OK first things first.You don't really give the character's much depth,we see what their doing but cant see them basically.What color is so and sos hair? Whats he wearing? The ...

Hi,nice story.Though i found a few wrong,namely the first two lines.A few sentences could do a little better with some rephrasing.Still,good job and keep it up!

Really nice poem.Though i found the last line a little odd,everything flows well togethor.Great job!

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