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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Beauty and the Beast part 3

    Awh, I love a happy ending! Wonderful job, I enjoyed this so much. I had to read the original for english in eighth grade and I hated it but this ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Beauty and the Beast Part 2

    Beautiful writing my dear. I loved it yet again. Such a contrast from the last but it makes you fall in love with the characters that much more. I can't ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Beauty and The Beast

    I'm not very good at the whole grammar thing, and it looks like everyone else has already gotten to that, so if you don't mind I think I'll just skip ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Black Pendragon Chapter 2

    Extremely good once again. I absolutely love this. You're wording is perfect and the plot keeps you wanting more. Can't wait to read more.

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Black Pendragon Chapter 1

    Wonderful, simply wonderful. The vocabulary is rich and the plot interesting. One of the few that can actually keep my attention. Can't wait to read more. Great job and keep ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Black Pendragon Prologue

    Wow, this is truly amazing. I can't wait to read the rest of this, you've totally got me hooked. As long as you keep posting, I'll keep reading. Great job ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 1

    "Summer, you gotta wake up." I shake my eight year old sister's shoulder. "Go away, Sammie." She grumbles and rolls over so she's facing away from me. I sigh, giving ...

    Oct 31, 2011


sometimes i don't consider myself a poet but then i remember that i literally write poetry
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