82manycookies

okay, now he hair is good, but i think you should add more curls to the top. and a little shine to it. near the bottom is were things get ...

this is amazing! i can't believe you can actually do anime. the face structure is good, the bottom, a little fuzzy, as for the rest simple... i love it!!!!!! i ...

um...okay... you need some more contrast. lights and darks. i like the concept, but um well i agree with you, you need to stick with anime. nice try though. i ...

8:26 AM Year 6021 Latvia, Rune City 21 years later… Shiva stood behind the counter cleaning a wrought beer glass as she gazed out the delivery’s front door. She watched ...

i'm not a big fan of poetry, but you really grabbed my attention with [Cascading reams of oceanic foam] in one section there was a uneeded dot. i wanted to ...

Hey there, Just a few things i wanted to point out. i don't feel like reading the whole thing over agian, but there were some troublsome nouns and verbs. you ...

Nice Work! your story was great. i couldn't find antthing too bad about it, it's just hard to critisize someone with more experience...bye ~Livi

this was amzing. you remind me of the way my friend used to write...minus the many grammatical errors, nice work! ~Livi

9:30 PM Year 6017 The Forbidden Forest The trees swayed harmoniously in the channeled wind that crept around them, their shadows dancing lightly on the grass from the lanterns set ...

hey im new, so i really don't know what to do. i've been looking for new readers for my story. i need to get some more imput. thanx LIVIJ

Hey this was something i've been working on for a while now and i just wanted some extra comments...feel free to leave a star...that is if you think its good ...