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Re: Remember Me-Chapter 1
Winie - Thanks for that little dialogue lesson! :D I'm sure it will be very helpful in the future, and of course thank you for taking the time to read ...
Mar 31, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One
This is fairly written well and it was enjoyable to read, in fact it's the first piece I've read from start to finish! I usually enjoy stories with balls, wars ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Remember Me-Chapter 1
The wedding was a good month away, and yet preparations had begun for it already. “Bibi, look at these marigolds, you won’t find better in all Karachi— “Oh, Mrs. Shamsi, ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey guys! I actually don't know if I'm new or not haha, I joined this site earlier but drifted away as I got busy with other things. I didn't even ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Ink Catcher
I liked it, definitely something i would like to continue reading, it was well written and smooth but a little more character description and in-depth description in general would do ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: I love you
The title caught my eye =) love is a very deep subject, but your poem, although very cute could be taken deeper, you can maybe add more stanzas, that would ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: I have a story to tell =)
“Bring out the girl,” A hoarse voice scratched into the silent night. A crowd had been gathered around to watch an execution of a young, dangerously magical girl. She stumbled ...
Apr 10, 2009
