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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Peddler

    Okay, you described the murder scene in a nice way, but what about the story? Where is the plot? The 'Peddler' came and murdered her and that's it? Why did ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ode To A Woman

    That was some good poetry. It had all the qualities of a world class poem--nice rhythm, no difficult words, the capacity to drive people to thoughts. Though I don't believe ...

    May 5, 2011


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