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I edited a little and changed a few things...hope the additions are ok. Let me know if anything else should be changed, and I love to read feedback on what ...

I loved it. I thought it was excellent, and it is a wonderful way to capture the feelings of losing a loved one. Its absolutely great. Very powerful

Great choice of words. Good work. I really felt it, and the posts above state it very well. Its a nice piece.

Its every girls dream. Its a good little story to put into words every girl's daydream, and the fact that it ended with the fairytale ending was so predictable it ...

It's great, and a wonderful reminder to all the readers to look at ourselves, and think "would we really do those things?" It's definetly good to do a self evaluation ...

At two thirty in the morning I am all ready to go. I have nothing to take with me, except the note that everyone is supposed to bring, and of ...

Seems you have a good mind full of wonder. I recognize the piece as something I could relate to, so similar to my style I could have even written it. ...

Hands are clasped His taste still resting on her lips A smile in her eyes Thankful for that stolen kiss Leaning up against his chest Stroking fingers through her hair ...

Incredible story, and it was written with amazing talent, so I hate to be a critic. But the whole last line kind of threw me off. If it was taken ...

I think this is excellent. I love the style, and the changing of characters. I too was a bit confused at first, but I could tell by your writing abilitly ...

I have lived life for fifteen years, eleven months, and four days. What do I have to say for it? I could tell you that I have achieved straight A’s ...