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When life is just too hard When the world just moves too slow It’s the releasement It’s the only thing I know It’s the lending hand That tells me where ...

I don't think the last two comments do this poem justice! I thought this was excellent! I have no critiques but I loved it and thought it was magical and ...

Excellent piece! I'm hooked! My only suggestion (besides what Brad pointed out) is this quote here. "How did Jenna know all this? Because she was wise." Although we do need ...

Face to the sky He inhales a final breath Then, he tumbled from the bridge Ready to accept his death Face to the sky He lets out his last breath ...

Absolutely wonderful. It's a little heart-breaking, only because I'm feeling that right now. Its completely fantastic and your wording was incredible. You captured exactly what I want to say to ...

Alright, so I changed a lot and made it all rhyme, and I edited some verses to make them clearer. I aslo added in a couple new stanzas which I ...

What if there were no lies? What if every word spoken had to be the truth? What if promises could never be broken? What if the first love lasted forever? ...

I really love this character, and now you need to find a story to put her in. You have many wonderful descriptions, and I'd love to see those dispersed throughout ...

This is really excellent. You have great word choice, and a great story. I cant wait to see more.

Yes, i see what your getting at. But it left me feeling a little confused. A little refinement could make this a great piece though!

I like this a lot; its very different and unique. One of a kind, which is excellent. Wonderful word choice, and its a great two-sided story. I dont know what ...

That was incredible. The way you used so many marvelous words in such a small space was great. The image you created was something i could really relate to, and ...

When I wrote in the beginning that the water was only ankle deep, and the MC imagined their bodies in the water, I hoped it created the picture that they ...

Somewhere in the sunshine A little girl sits, waiting And somewhere in the rain A mother cries out, praying Somewhere in the darkness A father is crying And somewhere in ...

I thought this was fantastic. I dont have a single critic. Marvelous. Excellent word choice, and I can really feel the pressence and hear the conversation. Its a wonderful new ...