21WhiteRoses

In my opinion the second sounds better but both are good. You probably could combine them if you wanted too. At first I read the two versions as one whole, ...

This is very powerful! You used sensory details to the fullest and that made it all the greater! At times it was a little hard to fallow but other than ...

Wow I totally agree with you on every topic! With the first topic I think that one day it won't be such an issue but as of now people need ...

This is a really lovely poem! I wish I was this good at poetry! Perhaps for a name "New Love" could be a possibility? I am not very good with ...

This is very well written :) It has good suspense and action, plus it is very well written. The only criticism I have is that it could have just a ...

The Landlady meticulously laid out her taxidermy utensils on a metal cart. Every inch of the cart was filled with things like scalpels, forceps, drills, hooks, pliers, stuffing rods, chisels, ...

I really love this! Beautifully written and very happy :) There isn't anything I don't like about this.

This is excellent! I'm usually a pretty difficult reader to hook but I really got sucked into this story! Aside from a few grammar mistakes this is extremely well written. ...

Could someone please help me come up with three of names:) ? The first is the father of the main character. He is very aristocratic, arrogant, and prideful. I pretty ...

Hi everyone! I just joined her and a still trying to find my way around. I'm glad I stumbled across this site! I just started taking writing seriously this year ...