21WhiteRoses

This is really good! I like the concept a lot. However there are a lot of places where the words don't flow together well. There are many little words missing ...

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This was a strange place. Not like any other I'd been to before. Well, at least I don't think I had. It was a town that seemed to have once ...

Wow this made my day!I was entertained the whole way through!Such a unique idea. I really love how casual the voice is in this. I defiantly give you an A ...

Adorable! I've never said that about a toilet plunger, but hey! There is a first for everything!Wish I could make stuff like that :)

~So I decided to add a new character to the novel I'm writing. This is her intro into the story I guess. I'm really bad at writing events in order ...

I really love this! They way you used sensory details was like an art. The whole story is so beautifully simple which can be hard to pull off! The last ...

This is lovely! Very well written and thought out! It's really got my interest peaked and I would love to read more! I really loved your precise usage of words. ...

This is amazing! I don't even think the word 'amazing' can describe it well enough! There are a few grammar errors but aside from that it is flawless! I really ...

From reading just this I am ready to buy it when you finish and publish it! I really like the setting and characters. The flow of the words are lovely!I ...

This was really good! It kept my interest till the very end and that's a hard feat to accomplish with me and my short attention span!There are so minor grammar ...

Really interesting! If I saw this on a shelf I would defiantly want to pick it up and see what is inside! I can't really put a word to it ...

Please read-> This is just a little scene I jotted down. It could be the very beginning of the story but that would be boring so more than likely I ...

This is very well composed. You made it easy for the reader to feel the mood of the poem. I can relate pretty well to this; I had similar thoughts ...

This is really lovely! I love how it has both beauty and mystery together. My favorite part is the very beginning because it captured my interest right away and was ...