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Re: Ellora/Chapter 3
I woke up suddenly, the way one might wake after They dreamt of falling. I felt dizzy as I slid out of the bed and looked about the same room ...
Dec 24, 2011 -
Re: To See Sound.
This is awesome! I really love the concept. It would be so dull to live in a world without music. Although i guess it would be kinda fun playing music ...
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: The Reincarnation of Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart
This is really great! I'm a big fan of Mozart and I would rock if he was really reincarnated! I thought this story was really clever and it captured my ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: What a lovely way to burn - Prologue + Chapter 1
Wonderful! I really like the voice in this. It really makes me want to read more!
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Recruited: Chapter One Take 2
This is pretty good! I really love the characters and their brotherly love. Also your descriptions are so vivid! I feel like I am out their with them! I really ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: Forty Degrees Celsium - Chapter 2 1/2
your writing just blows my mind! I'm really loving this novel so far. I wanna know what happens next! My novel is really rather puny next to this haha!I adore ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: Forty Degrees Celsium - Chapter 1
Wow I can tell you really put a lot of work into this. you really have a natural talent! I loved this story from the very first sentence!Your word choice ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: The Testimony of a Roman Centurion
This is awesome! Its very powerful and deep. Your word choice and sentence fluency is wonderful! I wish I could write like this! I would really love to read your ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: A Legend's Path
This is pretty good! I like how when you read it you aren't too sure whats going on. Mystery is a big plus in stories! The only grammar problems I ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Limerick 1
I really like this! Wish I was any good at poetry, but frankly I stink at it. This is great though! Keep at 'em!
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Ellora/ Chapter 2
When I opened my eyes again, perhaps an hour later, I was in a soft bed. The moon glimmered brightly through the windows. Risk was sitting at the side of ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Avelyn and John- Extract from my NaNo 2011
"Shhh... Let's go fall in love with fate, John." < Wow I really loved that line! This is a really wonderful peace! I love the feeling this couple creates. Very ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Kalu, Newborn Spirit
This is really wonderful! I like the concept a lot. Its so simple yet magical. Keep up the great work!
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Blood Red Skies
This is pretty good! There are a few grammar errors and a spot or two where the sentences could flow better. Aside from that its great! One thing you could ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: You, the essence of my praise
This is really great! Your word choice and sentence fluency is wonderful. You also set a very good mood to the poem. Great work! Keep writing!
Nov 21, 2011