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I really liked it. I would write a review but people have already done it for me, so I'm just going to say "Good Job," and hope to see the ...

Well first off thanks for the tips, I'll try and work on the things you mentioned. I'd like to see where you think the plot is going so I can ...

It meant that he and his mom were too poor too afford meat, not that he hadn't seen any. Sorry I could see how that can be confusing.

Thanks these things really help me, and I guess I was so anxious about the story that I forgot about all the descriptions, I'll try to work on that. By ...

I think you really have a way with words because from the moment i started reading was hooked like i wanted to know what was happening. I really think that ...

All I have to say is that this story grabbed me. I read the beginning and got sucked into it because I love stories about the end of the world. ...

I want to hear more.