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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Endless

    The concept of this poem is very interesting and new. I’m not sure if this character is experiencing this dream because of an event that actually occurred or just a ...

    May 18, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: bullying.

    Hey, 1nspire here for a review! This poem was really powerful. Though I have not experienced this exact situation, I can relate to some of the thoughts. It's great that ...

    May 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: There's No Soul in Retail

    Hey, 1nspire here for a review! I liked the point of view of this poem; people take workers for granted often and it’s interesting to read from that perspective. I’ve ...

    Apr 21, 2019
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: The Battlefield

    Hey, 1nspire here for a review! Great work on this piece. The thing they really stuck out to me here was the detail with which you describe each and every ...

    Apr 20, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: She Was

    Wow. This is a really powerful piece. I absolutely loved the last few line. I think there are a lot of people who need to read this piece. The emotion ...

    Apr 20, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Keeper of Secrets

    Hey, 1nspire here for a review! I really liked the emotion in this piece. It seems to get progressively darker, which was cool because it showed how keeping secrets may ...

    Apr 20, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: Pain

    Hey, 1nspire here for a review! I really liked the message in this poem. Love is mysterious and hard to understand sometimes and even through pain, it often emerges victorious. ...

    Apr 20, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: AJ's Mother

    Hey! 1nspire here for a review. I really like the premise of this story. The imagery is great and I liked that I could picture the characters really well because ...

    Mar 10, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Reviewer

    Hey, 1nspire here for a review! Let me start off by saying it's so cool that you used 2nd person point o view, as this is rare in literature, but ...

    Jan 26, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: ​An Incredible End

    Hey, 1nspire here for a review:) First of all, I'm sorry that you had an experience like this, but it's the sincerity really came across throughout. It's important for writers ...

    Jan 22, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Multi

    Hey, 1nspire here for a review! I really loved the suspense that you created throughout the story. Oftentimes, the protagonist is one of the smartest characters, and seems to always ...

    Jan 22, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: soft light and big hearts//vignette. {edited}

    This is so cute! I love that you used second person, which is rare, but really makes this story so much sweeter. I love the way that the characters don't ...

    Jan 22, 2019
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: Infamous

    I absolutely loved this! It's amazing that you were able to portray the personalities of these characters so well in such a short story. Also, I love the way you ...

    Dec 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A little hello to straight parents with not-so-straight kids

    Hey TheMulticoloredCyr! (Love the username) Let me start off by saying that the message in this poem is absolutely incredible. I think there are a lot of people who would ...

    Dec 23, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Road Signs

    Hey biochroma! Let me start off by saying that I love the message of this piece. The way that you described everything, from the beautiful rain to the wind made ...

    Dec 23, 2018


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