123THE8THWONDER

I like it!!! :D Good job! :D it really flows and sounds good! It has a good idea to it and is put together nicely! Thanks for sharing! God bless. ...

I like your song its great!! :D You could use i little rhyming here and there :roll: but other then that you did good! I am wondering the tune though... ...

I love it! :D it sounds loving and caring which is great! when i read it i pictured a homeless person or even abortion. :cry: I really liked it and ...

It is good but.... it seems dark. :( It really didn't give me a good feeling after i read it. If you are going to write about pain then show ...

I like it! :D it was short and sweet! It flowed and sounded good! It was deep and made me think. How does it relate to love by your point ...

I like your song!! :D i like the theme with the Prince and stuff! 8) your rhyming was great as well!! Keep Writing And thanks for sharing!! God bless "They ...

Hey! Your song is short but you seem like you have a pretty good idea of writing songs! But you need a hook and for it to flow. Ryhyming would ...