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Verse 1 There's just a few little things that's been runnin' through my mind, and I'm trying not to choke on the lack of evidence I find. And I cannot ...

Simple, sweet and conveys the message. I'm sure lots of people can relate to this :) I like it, good work xXx

I love the feel of this poem. Lovely imagery and you haven't overcomplicated the language. Some of the grammar is questionable. "All they have been looking for a safe hide" ...

I thought this was great. The idea was good and the imagery used was great. The repeated use of words beginning with "S" on the second stanza was really nice ...

In the garden The wind whispers To the giggling Pansies, The cackling leaves And the blades of grass Waving aimlessly to the sky. The garden gnomes watch the Pond water ...

Hey everyone :P I'm new, and the site looks pretty big and confusing, but hopefully I'll be able to find my way around. A few things about me: my name ...

I love it! The idea is really good and well developed and the imagery really draws the reader in. The way you varied your sentences created a sense of flow. ...