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Heey :) I think the idea is great but you could develop it more and maybe use some more imagery to make it sound a little more interesting. Also, maybe ...

Verse 1 I believe that we were meant to be-- forever and ever, eternally but the stars in the sky whispered to the mo-on and made us forget the things ...

I really like the poem! It's believable and well written, showing the confusion and sometimes panic when older people's memories forget. Adjusting to that can be weird sometimes :S Nice ...

I think the "oh" makes more sense if you heard it, more like an Ooo

Gosh everyone's so friendly :L it's so nice :P Hey Emily! :D and DragonLADY thanks for greetings. I like reading classics, romance, fantasy, historicals and maybe a mish mash of ...

I've heard enough Get out, and run Don't look back now Coz I'll be gone Give me my heart I don't care if its in parts. Coz even this grey ...

I like this poem a lot, especially the ending. The way the lines gradually get shorter and the last line, being the shortest, has a great punch to it. All ...

I liked the format it made the words "Highway", "Alive" and "Heart" like a secret whisper, and the gave the words an subtle, electric energy. It definitely made me feel ...

Aww thankyou very much :) yeah the website's kinda confusing at the moment :L but I'll get there. Thanks again for the feedback xXx

When you post lyrics I think it does that weird spacing thing anyway..whether you like it or not :S I liked it a lot maybe a little too much lovey-doveyness ...

It's a bit mainstream, and unoriginal but it would make a good pop song. Maybe develop it further and make it more personal xXx

I like the imagery used and I thought it was pretty darn good :) it was interesting to read and created a mood and alerted the senses. It was just ...

Ha I thought it was funny :L randomness works xXx

Sounds great :) Simplistic but pretty effective xXx

I really like it :) It's hard to judge when you can't hear the actual music but it's good and it has a nice beat/rhythm xXx